2.2 Specimen letters
Notice in this letter how the applicant first mentions how he knows of the company, then gives brief details of his age, education, and experience, then refers to his Director who approves of staff spending time abroad. Finally, he tells the bank why he wants to join them for a temporary stay in the UK, and asks for an application form. Of course, he could also include a c.v. with the letter, but knows the practice of this firm is to send application forms.
Questions:
1. How did Mr Bauer hear about the bank he is applying to?
2. What does he do in the bank where he now works?
3. What are his qualifications?
4. Why does his bank encourage people to go on overseas courses?
5. What does he want the UK bank to send him?
6. Which words in the letter correspond to the following: suggestion, getting a qualification, various methods of doing things, particular?
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In this example, notice the applicant immediately explains what the letter is about. She then goes on to expand on her present duties and emphasizes these and any other information that she feels is relevant to the advertised position, ignoring the duties in her previous employment which have no relevance to this particular post. Most importantly, she explains why she is applying for this particular vacancy and the qualities she can offer the company. Note that if she offered her current employers as referees, she could mention that she would prefer the company she is applying to not to approach her employers until after an interview.
Questions:
1. What position is Ms Brice applying for?
2. What does the abbreviation P.A. mean?
3. How did she learn about IT?
4. What reason does she give for wanting to join ICS?
5. Which words in the letter correspond to the following: ask for, everyday duties, continued with, materials used with a computer, e.g. discs, managing, real?
There are various layouts for a c.v. and this is just one example. Some c.v.s may have a section for supplementary information, where reasons for applying for the position and leaving previous and present employment are included, as well as personal qualities and skills which the candidate feels are relevant to the job. In this example, however, this material is included in the covering letter, see 1.2.4.
Curriculum vitae
Date of Birth: |
25 February 202- |
Name: Present address: |
Carol Brice 25, Westbound Road, Borehamwood, Herts, WD6 ID |
Telephone number: Marital status: |
0819539914 Single |
Education and qualifications: |
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1980-1985
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Mayfield School, Henley Road, Borehamwood, Herts, WD6 IDX GCE in English Language; French; History: Geography; and Art. |
1985 - 1987
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Hilltop Further Education College, Kenwood Road, London NW7 3TM. Diploma in Business Studies. |
Work experience: Oct’87-Dec’88
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Johnson Bros. Plc, 51-55 Baker Street, London WIA Type of Company: Retail Chain Stores Post: Junior Secretary Responsibilities: Secretarial work including typing; shorthand; correspondence; copying reports and minutes from shorthand notes; tabulating data; filing; answering customers' calls; mail distribution; and general office duties. |
Jan’89 - present |
National Auto Importers Ltd., Auto House, Sidmouth Street, London WCIH4GJ Type of Company: Car importers Post: Secretary to Assistant Director Responsibilities: Dealing with all correspondence; taking minutes at meetings and writing up Assistant Director's reports; receiving customers and suppliers: dealing with home and overseas enquiries; making decisions on behalf of A.D. in his absence: and representing the company at various business functions. |
Other information: |
While working I have attended various evening courses for Italian and French, and have also been on a special Information Technology course at The City College. My interests include tennis, badminton, swimming, and reading. |
References: |
Mr B. Norman, Assistant Director, National Auto Importers Ltd., Auto House, Sidmouth Street, London WCIH 4GJ. Mrs T. R. Bradley, Senior Lecturer, Business Studies Dept., Hilltop Further Education College, Kenwood Road, London NW7 3TM. |
Current salary: |
£14,000 per annum |
Questions:
1. What was Ms Brice's position at Johnson Bros?
2. Name three of her duties at National Auto.
3. Which words in the c.v. correspond to the following: unmarried, stenography, cataloguing and keeping data, acting for, wages?